Final Draft: Evaluation Of Audience Feedback

Here are my reflections after recieving some audience feedback on our final draft of our trailer.

WWW:

• The titles have definitely improved, they are all matching and are all relevant to the genre while sticking to the colour scheme.
• The narrative and storyline behind it is a lot easier to understand now, and there is a clear cliffhanger which makes them want to see the whole movie.
• The camera shots (especially those we had to re-film) are all really well done. The composition was well thought through, nothing was ever cut off where it was not meant to be like someone's head for example.
• The transitions (particularly the static transitions surrounding the news report) were liked and seemed to work really well.

EBI:

• Despite the target audience not mentioning this, I personally think that given more time, our sound could have been improved. For example, sometimes the ambient sounds are too noticeable.
• I think we could have included more titles which were quotes for example, rather than just those which help to tell the story.