- I agree that the text (especially on the magazine cover) is quite difficult to read due to the colours being too similar to the background and photo.
- We will change the colours, maybe adding a border or a glow so it is easier to read, without changing the colour scheme and layout completely.
- It is quite difficult to differentiate between titles and body text. It also doesn't always match, and the font of the poster is rather childish looking. Furthermore, people picked up on an error with upper and lower cases.
- We will pick a different font size and style for the different text on the magazine. For example, the main title will be bolder than subtitles, and the body text will also be different.
- The photo of the zombie on the poster doesn't stand out as much as people would have liked.
- We will edit the colours and experiment with effects such as the contrast in order to make the colours in the photograph more suitable and not as dull.
- The background colour of the poster is too bold and therefore makes the photograph of the zombie look obviously photo-shopped and unrealistic.
- We will make the background a slightly different colour, maybe including a fade or a glow around the photo so it no longer looks so sharply cut.
- The poster is too focused on horror that you can't tell it's also a comedy at all. Because of these differences, the two media pieces come across like two different pieces of work, and do not look related.
- We will make sure to change fonts and colours to match each other so the poster and magazine look as though they are for the same film, at the same time, ensuring that the genre is clear to the audience.
