Audience Feedback: Ancillary Task Draft 2 - Poster

Gelsomina De Lucia, 19

"The titles are so much better than before - they don't look childish anymore. I really like that you've changed the background colour as well. As for the photo, it is much more fitting for your genre - big improvement!"

Darren Marshall, 16

"It makes much more sense having your names in all caps rather than different fonts and cases. I really like the tagline, especially as it now matches the main title better. If I had to change one thing though, I would make the cropping around the hand a little smoother. Overall, a great job."

George Abingdon, 19

"The genre is really clear to me right away which is very impressive. The happy smiling face, contrasting with the dark colours makes for a really interesting and eye-grabbing visual. I think it's a good improvement from the last draft!"